All the email replies in the section above could be improved. Let’s look at how.
Greeting
Questions to consider are: Who are you writing (back) to? How formal should you be?
- If you are replying to an email, you should look at how the writer has signed off the email and reply using that information.
- If you are writing to someone for the first time, be formal. A “Dear + full name” or “Title + family name” will be fine.
Purpose
Questions to consider are: Who are you writing (back) to? What do they need to know?
- If you are replying, you will have a subject line already. However, if you need to create one, be clear, professional in tone and concise. Rephrase if you have a subject line that is more than 10 words long.
- If replying, answer the question asked!
- If writing to ask a question, be clear about what you expect the recipient to do after reading your email.
Grammar, Vocabulary and Spelling
Questions to consider are: How well do you know who you are writing to? How much time do you have to proofread your email?
- The better you know someone the more informal you can be (you can use shared technical terms, can add exclamation points, can add conversational phrases). You may also add in something amusing (but remember humour doesn’t always translate – so approach with caution).
- Not proofreading an email and sending one full of errors is likely to damage your reputation. If you don’t have time to proofread, use a generative AI tool that can check your email as you type.
Sign-off
Questions to consider are: How much does the person you are writing to know about you?
- In the line after your first name include information such as your full name, your student ID number, your favoured pronouns and if you are unsure whether people will know how to pronounce your name, include a link to you saying your name. You can also link to LinkedIn if you have a profile or a website which hosts your portfolio of work.